My samples for the Darkness II contest.
Definitely love the added panels - the page flows much more smoother that way. Also love the Darklings' and Demon Arms' designs!
Why thank you! That's what I was going for. I love sequential storytelling, so I couldn't not add a bit more to enhance the action - ha!
Cool! I like the added panels. The page, as scripted, was a bit awkward.
Thanks! Yeah, it was about 5 panels of actions packed into 3 panels of script, so I gave it some breathing room. Did you finish yours?
its a great page man. only issue is you have to many panels for whats asked for, other then that nice work.