Thanks man! I'll definitely keep working things out. I'm working on a few of my own projects as well and it's so much easier to make things read clearly when I'm doing the writing - ha! I need to fix that.
Hey man, there was a couple of confusing parts I'm seeing or parts that don't quiet feel right. The first was where DD dodges CA's shield while flinging his whiphook. I don't exactly buy it. The second is I'd love to see CA follow DD down off the roof or at least see him take the leap. Third and finally is the weapon swap at the end. I'm assuming they both wanted their weapons back but it would have been nice to see CA let go of the whip or it get jerked from his hand. Those are the ONLY things I see wrong with this, most of them just nitpicky.
That being said, these are by far your best works and completely professional looking man. I love it. It has a nice blend of techniques that keep it the complete opposite of boring and you pull off some really neat scenes. I can't wait to see more!
Thanks man, I appreciate it. Yeah, there were some tricky panels/pages in the script that I felt a little locked into. I looked at the final pages and really liked some of the minor changes that were made to make things flow better. I'll definitely keep working on things. And thanks for the compliments too!